muse ariadne writing club
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posted my entry for this week's prompt. nothing too crazy, just a stream of consciousness but 2nd person hits different https://melxncholyman.yorniq.xyz/muse
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i completely forgot to actually post the prompt yesterday! sorry about that 😅 here's this week's prompt though! try writing in the second person. address your audience and sit with them as you tell your story. see how this direct connection affects how you write.
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i'd love to join! here's my page https://moondvsted.yorniq.xyz/writing/muse/ and my button https://f2.toyhou.se/file/f2-toyhou-se/images/47052159_rd5iWTFAMmQWrMr.gif ^_^
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This was a fun one. I'm not sure if i strictly adhered to the prompt necessarily but it was nice https://siph.yorniq.xyz/library/muse/
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kph
2 years ago
love love LOVE this. love how thoughtful it is without judging the memory morphing as good or bad. love the phrase "dawn-bright loam". thanks for sharing!
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kph
2 years ago
also showed this to my gf who started gardening in the past couple years and she loves it too
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commemorative-ghosts
2 years ago
This is gorgeous; it reminds me of how our experience with things changes as we age, such as with a favourite childhood film as an adult, and the cycle of rediscovery.
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I posted my prompt fill for this week. I'm not sure if I quite suceeded at blending 2 senses though but it was fun https://percevalprintpress.yorniq.xyz/writing/muse/
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inkcaps
2 years ago
The image in the first few stanzas are so striking!! * __ * You really succeeded in capturing how scent is tied so closely to memory!!
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kph
2 years ago
the straightforwardness of this is very clean, very powerful. it feels like a monologue, almost, a warning with weight from the line breaks. i like how it closes and ends with 'you never forget the smell'--giving it the definite article and repetition instead of a description
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I've loved all of the prompts, but I've been swamped all month! Finished up and posted the piece I started for the feb(!!) echo prompt, hopefully freeing myself from the "oh god i can't read anyone else's before I write my version what if i can never have an original idea" cycle. Looking forward to catching up on folks' writings!
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owlroost
2 years ago
Hey, if it's any comfort, I read other people's pieces all the time before writing my own. It prompts me to think about the prompt in new ways, which gives me a more original idea than what I started with!
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percevalprintpress
2 years ago
Just read your prompt for this week - loved it especially the last few lines!
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hi lovelies ! i have another prompt for y'all 🥰 write a piece in which you blend two physical senses. maybe focus in on the taste or shape of words, or the feel of an old memory. imagine & sink into those sensations and see what comes up.
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owlroost
2 years ago
Looking forward to this- this prompt hits differently when you have synesthesia. :P
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Vivid and succinct. I especially enjoy the use of repetition.
oh this is so wonderful. chills is v correct that it's so vivid!
This is stunning- love the use of Greek. I could see this as a song (honestly, I'm a little tempted to ask you if I could put it to music).
@owlroost omg—you have my full permission to do so, i would be honoured
Just did the sample recording- I think this is going to be neat. I leaned into glitchy effects for the repeated bits of text.
Really love it!
obsessed with being thrust into other people's perspectives/ worlds when they write in second person, great job putting me in a new place :o) <3