poisonedeffigy
3 months ago
should i make yet another puke fic... heh... but would you even be able to puke if your stomach was torn open. much to think about
yunkosjeskt
3 months ago
yes. gastrointestinal perforation. though it'd be extremely mixed with blood and other matter
poisonedeffigy
3 months ago
i may have self-inflicted stockholm syndrome with art. i fucking loathe SFM and writing. but ohhhh its fun sometimes
yunkosjeskt
3 months ago
it still makes sense because it's in nick's pov, therefore you would need to describe his reaction. "the smoker looked blahblahblahblah and it left a sour taste in nicks mouth" type shit. if you only just said that the character was the smoker, without elaborating on the appearance or "aura", nick's reaction would not feel as strong (´・ω・`)
yunkosjeskt
3 months ago
perhaps, you dont need to describe every detail and thats okay. but emphasize what aspects of the smoker's appearance that nick is grossed out from
poisonedeffigy
3 months ago
@yunkosjeskt that's kind of how i wrote it in the fic anyway, thank you! i tried to focus on the big tumor & extra tongues because i think that's what your eyes would be drawn to naturally
poisonedeffigy
3 months ago
@yunkosjeskt truly... everything is happening to me except for the things i want to happen 😓
awwwwwe couple goals